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Jbelled24

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I have been drawing this one for a good while now, I have a lot more to work on with her but I am not sure when I will be able to post the finished piece. I would love anyones advice that will make her better and more authentic. Thank you for checking her out... ♥

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Media Used Pencil

Posted on 07/27 2007

Category Drawing

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Type Traditional

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On July 28th 2007 NeutralR1 Said:


	I am not sure what form of advice I coul give after all of the wonderful Ideas everyone else has given so far. I think you are doing wonderful so far, and should keep it monotoned, and not add color, because it will turn out better.

On July 28th 2007 mrskritter Said:


	I don't draw so can,t give you any advise but I love your artwork and I think you are a amazing artist

On July 27th 2007 Missy13d69 Said:


	Awesome.

On July 27th 2007 hucksgirl Said:


	The "apple" of her cheek could be lowered on the bottom a little. Just a few more layers of shading is all you need to complete it. Once you have a darkened piece, and I agree about the dark background, you could add a few bright turqoise beads to her hair piece to really add variety and "pop."

On July 27th 2007 cohnwrithe Said:


	A slight darkening of the background would really make her pop on the paper. I wish I could see a good scan of this. I love the braid and headpiece. I know I've commented already, but knew you wouldn't mind. Lemme know if you need a little help. Seems to me you're on the right track already though. :)

On July 27th 2007 jessicawieberg Said:


	WOW....This is Beautiful....Keep up the great work.

On July 27th 2007 tswieberg Said:


	Beautiful, I see a woman that is very strong and has a lot of dignity. I am not sure what twichims is talking about when she says the hair needs to look less solid. I think her hair looks really good. Her nose and her mouth look like they are proportioned nicely and I just love her braid. You have done an awesome job on her Shell and I can't wait to see the finished piece.

On July 27th 2007 MikeyLH Said:


	It still looks fantastic though.

On July 27th 2007 MikeyLH Said:


	More darks. It's still very light.

On July 27th 2007 Phoureh Said:


	The guy that made the comment beneathe me is an absolute genius. You should listen to everythig he says. :)

On July 27th 2007 cohnwrithe Said:


	Her expression, her detail, the years in her eyes. Everything in this perfect. Its about time you posted what you had so far. I love it. Your best piece to date.

On July 27th 2007 bad123ass Said:


	i think everything is said below,very good so far:-}

On July 27th 2007 California1516 Said:


	this is very good..i think they peeps below me said everything that i was thinking of...

On July 27th 2007 twichims Said:


	The sketch is off to a very good start. Everything seems to be proportioned very well. If this is an elderly woman she will need more shading to accentuate than in her features, and I would try to get the hair to look less solid, every hair is not needed to be drawn- only the ones that bring out the shadows. But I really like were this is going, hope I was some help

On July 27th 2007 joguff1977 Said:


	It would be awesome to see some bead design above the braid. You are right about the Hair keep working it. The feather has a great start but It should be larger and more full. Keep working on him his face is great to me.

On July 27th 2007 Jbelled24 Said:


	I also used a reference from a book I borrowed from the library

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