246roktoro

The world eats people

Created: 10/29 2009

Views: 32

Category: Love

+ 4	Sing the song of a blood red bird
+ 2	My writing pen is filled with love :})
+ 2	I wished on a falling star!!
+ 1	Falling stars bring lovers togather
+ 1	Tomarrow togather, my love.
+ 23	Stone guardian
+ 16	Just want to forget...
+ 21	One two three you're kilin me
+ 15	The new true king
+ 14	Outnumbered by fallen angels
+ 17	Lightening whiplash
+ 15	Born of ash.
+ 16	X-stacy
+ 15	Midget sky
+ 10	Go to hell soul snacthing succubus.

Splitting on my seems

Sue it shut, rip it open, slice the threat that holds it closed

tear the divide and make the void, I'll poke my heart like it's a toy

Tickle it like elmo and make me scream, I'll say my name as I'm tearing at the seem

Ripping the threads, playing with life's, cutting the dolls with the razor knife

Be borne and beat again, resurection is armagedon

Kill yourself, rise from the grave, die like the dead, crawl like the brave

Only get one shot in a short long life, make it scarred with other peoples knifes

Slicing life, every possible seem, like this is impossible, you've never seen me breath

Walk like the damned, fighting unholy, beating down satan, playing on foley

Cards and decks, ripping open, the seem sealed shut, lifting up life, slicing off the gut

Sue myself shut to rip myself open, bleed out it's just jokin

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On October 30th 2009 246roktoro Said:


	I pretty much type that fast I don't really care about my spelling, just how it is when I have an idea in my head... As for psyches yeah they're BS... I've learned all there tricks the only thing that can help me now is talking to myself... As for the correction on the spelling, I have one problem, I can't edit it after it's published and I tend to pick and poke at it and it just nags at my mind if I read it over before it's out... Yeahh

On October 29th 2009 colinfiat Said:


	Psychs are useless, keep the poetry going, get it out of your system. Wondering what other people may think about your state of mind is the best way to get a grip on your own reality. Only two suggestions I have are to check spelling and read what you write. Read your own stuff over and over. Sorts out your head and helps with the next poem.

On October 29th 2009 246roktoro Said:


	And no when I said threat I didn't mean thread

On October 29th 2009 246roktoro Said:


	Eh I have my moments where my spelling ends up incorrect, usually my spelling is good, just lately I've been having these dulling moments, see my thoughts don't make it out of my head too well, so I put them down as fast as possible, I don't really check back for mistakes, but thanks for the poke... And help haha past seven years I was with a therapist, really only person that can help me now is myself

On October 29th 2009 colinfiat Said:


	Is 'sue' meant to be 'sew', theat for thread, life's for lives, borne for born... brave don't crawl. short long life? 'seem' for seam? foley? slicing OF the gut or taking cutting the gut away (off)? what ever this poem is about, go see a psych or buy a dictionary - either may help.