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just kinda popped in my tiny head ENJOY

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Created: 07/17 2007
Views: 391
Category: Anger

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Trapped Inside Your Love

Never Give Up

A cut here

A cut there

You can find them everywhere

Razor-sharp blades

cut through my skin

leaving me bleeding

all over again

I've done this once

I'll do it again

You had your chance

But you ignored me

You asked for this

So don't pretend

If this all goes amiss

It wasn't your fault

This was all your doing

It is all your fault

You did this to me

You were the one to assault

My very existence

My very being

Never lending me your assistance

Just left my heart bleeding

Now I'm broken inside

I don't feel alive

All I do is strive

For my life and my pride

Will it ever return

To my half empty soul

In wonder I yearn

But I guess all I can do

Is keep on trying

And never give up

Cause it's not my time of dying

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On March 7th 2008 professormcgee Said: 
professormcgee very dark, love it!!
On November 2nd 2007 dsouthernlily Said: 
my picture
love it!! Great work..Keep it up
On July 23rd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said: 
J3w3llC82890 i can feel wat ur saying! please keep me posted! *Jewell*
On July 18th 2007 gennae Said: 
gennae that was so gr8
On July 17th 2007 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth wow, this really rocked hard! (the backround and such is a nice touch also) This was beastly, good job!
On July 17th 2007 rockprincess31 Said: 
rockprincess31 Wow!!! That is truely awesome!!! The pain is there and I can feel it. Keep writing!!!
On July 17th 2007 7unicornrings Said: 
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