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reopening a wound causes it not to healRate this Poem
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Created:
01/21 2008
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204
Category:
Pain
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Please stop picking my scab |
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Summer Storm |
Please stop picking my scab
You want me to go on, as if nothing has changed.
You want me to act like you caused me no real pain.
I wish everything could just be the same.
You don't relalize your slowly driving me insane.
If only i didn't feel anything, but it pours down like rain.
i'm not sure how you think we can still be friends, when being near you
feels like i'm carrying around a heavy chain.
i want to run into your arms , and touch your sweet face, but i can't
remove the dark stain it covers me in an suffocating embrace.
Please just let me heal and yes it is a big deal.
Can't you see its much to soon for me.
Can't you just let me be.
You are the one who broke up with me.
| On January 22nd 2008 RalRasper Said: |
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| i understand |
| On January 22nd 2008 Autumnr1 Said: |
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| it does get weird but thats just how my feeling came out at the end. |
| On January 21st 2008 akrovaz Said: |
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| Wow, I can really relate, due to recent events that have occured in my own life. I truly like it. |
| On January 21st 2008 amackey1988 Said: |
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| The rhyme scheme gets weird toward the end but its good. Only spelling i noticed was "an suffocating". Good work. |


