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i miss that bastard i must be lonley.Rate this Poem
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Created:
02/20 2008
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175
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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Fake |
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18
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still |
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in the end |
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active night |
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arsenic |
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Alone |
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The Real Reason i'm Alone!! |
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Broken |
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Please stop picking my scab |
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Strong |
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Bitter |
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Book |
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deprived |
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Summer Storm |
Bitter
I miss your sweet lips.
Then i remember what you did.
Crushed my spirit bit by bit.
Grabbed hold of my heart and just ripped,
until there was nothing left of it.
You once said you loved me, thats the story you told.
Then you took it back, Now i'm bitter and cold.
My heart doesn't beat, there is nothing left but mold.
You use to take my hand when ever we would meet.
Now you walk on the opposite side of the street.
| On March 16th 2009 Autumnr1 Said: |
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| haha haha haha haha haaaaaaaaaaaaaa ha |
| On November 22nd 2008 sarahb8 Said: |
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| haha darren walks on opposite sides of the street....when you told him to get lurch haha that was funny |
| On February 27th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| i loved it too. the end made me feel like u wanted to add more but changed ur mind or something...but that doesnt take away from the poem (in my opinion)....i felt the emotion. good job. |
| On February 26th 2008 beautyisthewol Said: |
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| i like it and i know how you feel. |
| On February 26th 2008 dsouthernlily Said: |
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| i liked it! |
| On February 20th 2008 imagitu95 Said: |
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| good, BUT...i feel it could have been a little more in depth....go check out my new poem "Fade Away" |


