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Created:
10/16 2008
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104
Category:
Pain
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What do you do? |
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accident. |
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say. |
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Flame |
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Gone. |
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Lost |
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Flame
Theres something inside me
its burning like a flame.
it wont go away
i know what it is.
when i tell someone there reaction is nothing.
the flame still wont go away.
It hurts all the time. like a knife in my side.
what can i do to make it go away.
ive tried everything. water, ice.
the only thing left is to fight fire with fire.
but don't people say if you fight fire with fire you only get burnt?
so what do you do.
try more Ice, Try more water.
how will it go away.
with time the fire only gets bigger.
so what do i do?
Please Login to post comments| On December 11th 2008 Poglu Said: |
| nicely done...i find a bucket of water helps with your run of the mill fire:P
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| On October 17th 2008 Bengalsbaby1 Said: |
| thanks |
| On October 16th 2008 lyrikaldisastr Said: |
| u gotta figure out what the fire is and analyze it;)
but as far as the poem goes its good...like how u stayed on topic
*thumbs up* |
| On October 16th 2008 DreamersApathy Said: |
| schweet imagery.loved it |
