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My Poems
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Broken Bottle |
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127
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Love Wasted |
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Missing Him |
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So Far |
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To Get Through It |
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Mother |
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Life |
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Wishes |
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Home |
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You |
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I don't need you |
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Suicidal Love |
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Not Anymore |
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Consumining Love |
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My Decision |
Happier Place
As I lay here on the ground, waiting for somone to let me be found,
I look to an angle, and what do I see? A tall man in black, standing behind a tree.
The look in his eyes, none like another.
For it is dark and cold, like an unforgiving brother.
He stares at me for minutes, without ever moving an inch.
But I can't run, nor scream, nor cry, or even try to flinch.
Another moment passes, with his empty evil glare,
then he slowly starts moving toward me,
and I seem to see him everywhere.
He comes into clear view, and I turn frighteningly blue,
for I feel I can no longer breath,
he then takes my hand, and I somehow manage to stand,
and he whispers, "My looks are not to deceive.
For I have come from the land of none, awaiting you and your soul.
But do not fear, I will make it clear,
that this is any but what the Devil's done.
To you I am Death, and I take your last breath,
for you no longer need it here."
Then I looked around, and to my astound,
it all seems to now be clear.
I see so many angelic faces,
the scene too heavenly to describe.
I look down and see my loved ones frown,
because now I'm by the Lord's side.
I say please don't cry, wipe the tears from your eyes,
do not leave one single trace.
My loved ones, know, that the suffereing's ended it's show,
and now I'm in a happier place.
| On January 11th 2008 vernathome Said: |
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| I love it, found it shocking and soothing, great job I will read more of your poems for sure. |
| On September 29th 2007 ausjo Said: |
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| Ooooo kinda spooky. Like it though |
| On September 20th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| I love it. |
| On September 12th 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| Great work! |
| On September 12th 2007 martianmike Said: |
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| deep |


