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Broken Bottle |
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Love Wasted |
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Missing Him |
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So Far |
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To Get Through It |
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Mother |
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Life |
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Wishes |
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Home |
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You |
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I don't need you |
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Suicidal Love |
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Not Anymore |
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Consumining Love |
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My Decision |
Missing Him
I do love him, this I know, but he's so far away,
how could I had possibly let him go.
I could write him a letter, though a phone call would be better.
But it's impossible to describe, how much I feel for him inside.
Through mail he tells me he loves me, and I feel so light and free,
and though I thinks it's strange, he seems to love me for me.
He always lets me know how much he cares,
even though he's not here and he is there.
He always gives me compliments, even when I don't expect them,
and whenever I'm depressed, it's my broken heart he mends.
I miss him while he's gone, just like he misses me,
and when we talk again, he's the only one I see.
It never really occurs to me how many miles he's away,
because when we get to talk to each other,
it's as if he's here with me to stay.
No matter how how much I confess my love for him,
to me it doesn't seem to be enough.
I want him here with me so badly,
because then things would seem so tough.
I'll tell him a million times that I love him and I wish he could be here,
and when I think how far he is away, I'll begin to shed my tears.
Although we can't ne together right now, I know we will one day.
Until that day arrives, for his continuous love I'll pray.
| On February 17th 2008 mandaluvsricky Said: |
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| omg!!! im goin through the exact same thing right now!!!!!
i know exactly how you feel!!!!
like seriously!!
i cant wait till we're together again!!!
:DD |
| On January 20th 2008 2lateforme Said: |
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| i feel the same way.
=[ |
| On October 29th 2007 nwirotod Said: |
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| This is a great poem, I do love one guy but he live in USA and I live in Thailand so it is so far away. I like you poem a lot.... |
| On September 24th 2007 guardgirl22 Said: |
| On August 16th 2007 ChristinCraig Said: |
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| I think its great !! My Husband is in the navy
and we only get to talk on the phone about once
a month and he gets to write one letter a week.
This poem fits me great. Keep up the great work. |
| On August 2nd 2007 lizzyfairytale Said: |
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| my boyfriend lives in mississippi and i live in GA, thinking about it as i read this made me cry cuz i love him so much |
| On July 5th 2007 ADRAINLOVE Said: |
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| THIS POEM IS SO FREAKIN CUTE I CAN REAKTE TO ME AND MY BABE |
| On June 1st 2007 gawjusliz4lyf Said: |
| On May 25th 2007 Brandilynn135 Said: |
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| its always nice when you can relate a poem to so many people. Good job you did a great job |
| On May 1st 2007 Bladecjc Said: |
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| awesomely relatable (sp), great use of rhyming! |
| On April 19th 2007 jmh1011 Said: |
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| i luv this one ur a really great poet!!!!!! |
| On April 17th 2007 aazil888 Said: |
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| thatsreally good. i kno how u must feel. i would hate that so much |
| On April 14th 2007 ISBILL Said: |
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| i feel that way right now because i live so far away from david |
| On April 14th 2007 Emmabee25 Said: |
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| That is exactly what is happening to me...noce poem! |
| On April 14th 2007 Zing18 Said: |
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| another good poem.... it really sux... but when that time comes that u guys get back togeather, and u guys still love each other... it must be ment to be =) |
| On April 14th 2007 ojkopk5 Said: |
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| my husband is getting called up to go over seas and I am really going to miss him. I've been through it before so I know how you feel. Even thou you may not be going through the same things. |
| On April 13th 2007 Blueangel1371 Said: |
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| aww thats a very cute poem i hope you see him again and it works out |
| On April 13th 2007 kelala00597 Said: |
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| awww thats soo sweet |
| On April 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| aw i hope u see him again! |
| On April 12th 2007 mely1983 Said: |
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| what a grat poem its like my situation with my husband he's in Venezuela and i'm here in New York hopefully he will be here soon for the first time |
| On April 12th 2007 jasbabe Said: |
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| its good now i miss more my boyfriend i cant wait to see him |
| On April 12th 2007 Trippaholic Said: |
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| i really felt this poem :(..been there before.. |
| On April 12th 2007 themisskayla Said: |
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| all as i gotta say is..........
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On April 12th 2007 imbored9909 Said: |
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| yeah... |
| On April 12th 2007 coollizzie168 Said: |
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| i like this poem |


