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Someone I cared 4 had moved far away : (

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Created: 04/12 2007
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Category: Love

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So Far

How can I love you when you're so far away?

Do you really love me? I guess it's hard to say.

You say you'll always be there,

though you don't really know where.

You can say you love me all you want.

But it only seems to be a taunt.

I can't describe my feelings for you.

The words I think of will probably never do.

I know I can't be where you are.

Why do you have to be so far?

So far that I can't feel your touch on me.

So far that it will never be.

So far that you will never be mine.

Though you say that it will all be fine.

"Everything will be alright",

are the words that leave you mouth,

but how can you say that, when I'm in so much doubt.

The doubt of us ever being one,

the doubt of us never being done.

I think of you as mine, but she has us both in a bind.

You kknow I'll always love you,

no matter what you think of me.

But because you're so far away,

I think we both know that it could never be.

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On February 17th 2008 mandaluvsricky Said: 
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i know exactly how you feel!!!! DDD: i almost cried.. iloveit!!!
On January 20th 2008 memaselfandi Said: 
memaselfandi wow this explains my last relationships soo damn well i love it
it almost made me cry!!
On May 16th 2007 cass2010 Said: 
cass2010 Good
On April 25th 2007 Electronicmeds Said: 
Electronicmeds i love it. and i can relate.
On April 14th 2007 JesusSavesAll Said: 
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so sad. but very good.
On April 14th 2007 Zing18 Said: 
Zing18 another good one....
On April 13th 2007 Sarsbabyface Said: 
Sarsbabyface I have felt this way... nice words to capture the feelings.
On April 13th 2007 ang3lofthenite Said: 
ang3lofthenite This is very good!!! SUch emotions n feelings. Many can relate to what u wrote great job hunnie!
On April 13th 2007 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 aw that describes one of my old relationships..its really good!
On April 12th 2007 Trippaholic Said: 
Trippaholic very good :)
On April 12th 2007 mrspina Said: 
mrspina OMG!! i LOVE it!!! ♥♥♥!!!!!!
On April 12th 2007 imbored9909 Said: 
imbored9909 god...
On April 12th 2007 coollizzie168 Said: 
coollizzie168 kool!!
On April 12th 2007 Poglu Said: 
Poglu Very well writen!! And youre writing about a deep but common feeling...
On April 12th 2007 jaliznut Said: 
jaliznut good job
On April 12th 2007 FamousOne777 Said: 
FamousOne777 Very Nice
On April 12th 2007 shaunsmom22 Said: 
shaunsmom22 seems you are a doubtful person in the love department, you write good poems about it though, lol
On April 12th 2007 ashleyswebb Said: 
ashleyswebb ♥♥