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Written: 10-18-05Rate this Poem
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04/19 2007
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Pain
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I don't need you
I try to believe all the things that you say but I can't. You look at me, I look at you, and you look away. I can see the lies in your eyes, and you think I don't know. You were unfaithful and went behind my back. It's like you threw a bunch of puzzles at me and they're starting to attack. Like a heart attack, but they attack my feelings. Why can't you stop? Stop all the infidelity, stop all the lies, just STOP! I loved you. I was faithful, but you repaid me by betraying me and that's what makes you a low-life. Maybe you're afraid of commitment. Maybe you've just lost your love for me. Whatever it is, I can live without it. I don't need the lies and the arguments. I know now that I don't need you.
Please Login to post comments| On July 28th 2008 Aivilo1124 Said: |
| that was GREAT!!! |
| On November 16th 2007 ruskiya Said: |
| wow way strong! i like it |
| On September 12th 2007 8768444h Said: |
| i loved it |
| On June 14th 2007 shygurl23 Said: |
| I love this poem i have been there before. |
| On May 15th 2007 PVTtaylor Said: |
| hun i have to inform you that most guys, NOT ALL, do not know how to communicate. thats something that i had to learn the hard way i with you can understand. A lot of times you have to trick them in a conversation. |
| On April 19th 2007 ruthy04042 Said: |
| THIS IS TRUE FAKE "LITTLE BOY" THINK THAT WE DONT KNOW SHIT... |
| On April 19th 2007 blutess Said: |
| i liked it the way it was. at a time like that, u don't really think of fancy words except maybe a couple.dem bad, bad words.lol |
| On April 19th 2007 angeleyes11192 Said: |
| u need more original words, but other than that it has great form. =D |
| On April 19th 2007 pinkslip300 Said: |
| everyones been through this crap
ur really fantastic! |
| On April 19th 2007 isdrowning Said: |
| a lot of people can relate with this poem, but that doesn't make it good. that felt like more of a rant than a poem. the words are juvenile and sharp. |
| On April 19th 2007 wink112wink Said: |
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| this is really great! |
| On April 19th 2007 rainythoughts Said: |
| !!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On April 19th 2007 coollizzie168 Said: |
| strong!!!!! lovely!! :) |
| On April 19th 2007 dureall Said: |
| I been here before So I totally relate. |
