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Created:
04/19 2007
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6513
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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Broken Bottle |
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127
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Love Wasted |
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Missing Him |
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So Far |
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To Get Through It |
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Mother |
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Life |
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Wishes |
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Home |
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You |
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I don't need you |
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Suicidal Love |
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Not Anymore |
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Consumining Love |
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My Decision |
Suicidal Love
You can't hear her. You can't save her.
When you went away, all she thought about was crying.
When you said goodbye, she felt like she was dying.
You could never see how she felt, because she kept it locked away.
You never saw her tears, because she always hid her face.
You'll never know her love for you was neverending.
You'll never know how much her heart was bending.
It hurt her to see you leave,
that day she couldn't even breathe.
But she knows now that she can be happy without the slightest bit of pain.
She knew what she was doing, when she met face to face with the train.
Please Login to post comments| On July 29th 2009 smily6135023 Said: |
| omg that is so great, very touching indeed.... |
| On March 21st 2009 tricia001131 Said: |
| i like this a lot |
| On August 3rd 2008 Bl33dingLov3 Said: |
| really good |
| On July 28th 2008 Aivilo1124 Said: |
| very good. ^_^ |
| On July 4th 2008 emoathiest Said: |
| i love it!! :] |
| On May 2nd 2008 darkqueen1366 Said: |
| omfg this made me cry becuz i just had someone break up with me and keep writing and one day u may be great |
| On April 16th 2008 JasonEmoKid Said: |
| nicely done!
i like it[: |
| On April 3rd 2008 Stolensoul16 Said: |
| WOW!!! KEPP WRITING!!! THATS GORGEOUS!!! |
| On March 18th 2008 Gothgurly69 Said: |
| I love this poem!! it is real and you can understand exactly what itz about. (CT)
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| On March 14th 2008 Omegaangeldee Said: |
| That was amazingly amazing. I wouldn't have cried, but I sneezed instead :(... stupid cold! |
| On February 25th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said: |
| omg i looooooooooove it |
| On February 25th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said: |
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| omg i looooooooooove it |
| On February 17th 2008 niamiles Said: |
| verii good...almost brought tears to mii eyes bcuz this feeling is oh so familiar |
| On February 2nd 2008 idontmakeusern Said: |
| oooooooooooooooh awesomeness |
| On January 31st 2008 imanemogirl Said: |
| holy shit!i love this!it totaly explains how i felt when my boyfriend broke up with me!only,i came face to face with a piece od obsidian,not a train. |
| On January 25th 2008 shadyishott Said: |
| wow i can relate to this me and my aunt and cuzin were really close and wen she left it hurt but i came face to face with a razer not a train lol wow and squirrel4207 fuck u ur probley just jeaus cuz u dont know how to write.
Y_Y |
| On January 14th 2008 Alexithymia90 Said: |
| Pretty pretty meow meow |
| On December 30th 2007 Hildebrand90 Said: |
| beautiful |
| On December 28th 2007 liababy67 Said: |
| this poem was great i loved it |
| On December 11th 2007 jskeldon Said: |
| wow awsome poem |
| On December 5th 2007 donkaii Said: |
| wow i love the ending =D |
| On November 25th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: |
| this is really good. it brought tears to my eyes when i read it |
| On November 21st 2007 demonchild320 Said: |
| to tell you the truth..i cried when i read this. |
| On November 7th 2007 rocket2aaron Said: |
| wow, that was really amazing |
| On October 27th 2007 hnbsoftball35 Said: |
| dam that was good |
