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Created: 11/07 2009
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Category: Fear

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Smokey Eyes

Smokey Eyes

You say, “live life to the fullest”

But what you mean is party hard everyday

Make money just to get by

Drink, smoke, and get laid

 

Get out there and socialize

Bat those bloodshot smokey eyes

Pop, lock, and drop

Grind random guys

 

Mooch off your collegiate friends

While your GED lies incomplete

& Only go to church

When your hangover agrees

 

Since you’re a year older than me

You seem to think that makes you superior

Sweetie, you may have looks

But that’s only exterior

 

I’m slowly building my future

Though I have committed social suicide to you

I want comfort and security in my golden years

Don’t tell me you don’t want the same thing too

 

Please, my friend, put your car keys down

We may be young but one day that’ll change
Let’s live life and not feel guilty tomorrow

Because it’s staring us in the face

 

 

 

 

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On November 17th 2009 huronpliskin Said: 
huronpliskin sounds like someone's getting disillusioned with collegiate life XD. you gotta smack them around sometimes for them to listen i find...but if they dont after that, not much you can do...
On November 7th 2009 XxEmoLifeXx Said: 
my picture
its really good :) you should read some of mine
On November 7th 2009 AprilKirby94 Said: 
AprilKirby94 this is really good :) keep up the amazing work.
On November 6th 2009 speederspider Said: 
speederspider lovely:)
On November 6th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: 
DashboardLogic I messed up the Author comments but this is for my best friend in the entire world and I wish she could see how much I care about what she's doing.