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Smokey Eyes |
Smokey Eyes
You say, “live life to the fullest”
But what you mean is party hard everyday
Make money just to get by
Drink, smoke, and get laid
Get out there and socialize
Bat those bloodshot smokey eyes
Pop, lock, and drop
Grind random guys
Mooch off your collegiate friends
While your GED lies incomplete
& Only go to church
When your hangover agrees
Since you’re a year older than me
You seem to think that makes you superior
Sweetie, you may have looks
But that’s only exterior
I’m slowly building my future
Though I have committed social suicide to you
I want comfort and security in my golden years
Don’t tell me you don’t want the same thing too
Please, my friend, put your car keys down
We may be young but one day that’ll change
Let’s live life and not feel guilty tomorrow
Because it’s staring us in the face
| On November 17th 2009 huronpliskin Said: |
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| sounds like someone's getting disillusioned with collegiate life XD. you gotta smack them around sometimes for them to listen i find...but if they dont after that, not much you can do... |
| On November 7th 2009 XxEmoLifeXx Said: |
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| its really good :) you should read some of mine |
| On November 7th 2009 AprilKirby94 Said: |
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| this is really good :) keep up the amazing work. |
| On November 6th 2009 speederspider Said: |
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| lovely:) |
| On November 6th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: |
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| I messed up the Author comments but this is for my best friend in the entire world and I wish she could see how much I care about what she's doing. |


