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Wrote this about my friend ValRate this Poem
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Created:
05/10 2009
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Respect
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Not A Safe Place |
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Life's Little Game |
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I wish... |
Little Puppet Girl
You say you’re a puppet on a set of strings,
But if that were true you wouldn’t have a voice to sing,
You sing such sweet melodies of you own
If you were a puppet, you would have a heart set of stone
With a stone heart how could you be a happy friend?
How could you smile, with out the paint chipping off in the end?
You see my dear,
You are not a puppet, only a scared girl, who has many fears.
Please Login to post comments| On June 15th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| I like this. It reminds me of... me |
| On May 10th 2009 madmarcus Said: |
| It starts out pretty damn strong and ambitious...it doens't go wrong at all it just fades in intensity...I like poems that build up better...this was good and I like the back round picture too. cool |
| On May 10th 2009 alexparker1998 Said: |
| That was very interesting i liked it alot... ;) |
| On May 10th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
| **off |
| On May 10th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| so therefor escapes my vote for now |
| On May 10th 2009 XXFictitiousXX Said: |
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| the one of mentionin of 'paint chippin' was unfortunatly all i liked... that and the concept of puppets i find interestin... it's just puppets and allotta the words have been used countless times... they felt dead as those paint shavings lying lost amongst dust on the floor |
| On May 10th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Very interesting. I like how you used the word "paint chipping." |
| On May 10th 2009 stitchchick92 Said: |
| How..idk
weird?
or
something |
