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Truth?

& If she will believe it, if for a moment, she will give it thought. To open up her heart and mind, again to what it could be.

Beneath their stares so watchful, moving away from lustful lunges intentional. How can she believe its not all fake? That every shared word, every loved moment, is not a lie?

& If it ends horridly again, could she really make it

through this time, or is this not love at all, but her own lusting?

For said it is not there, until you are full grown, until your mind is built into that working, functioning, fully comprehensive, working piece to let us understand.

But are his words so meaningful, or should she forget and play along? If she will, she might loose herself into the words, with no truth, these words with no meaning.


If he finds those words...But what words are they, that make her believe, to deceive her into the mockery she is giving into. Can he find those words for her to believe that he is not like the rest?

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On July 7th 2009 MauiWowies Said: 
MauiWowies wow very deep and I can somewhat relate to this as i had a few friends like this, very good. Fav line was "Beneath their stares so watchful, moving away from lustful lunges intentional. How can she believe its not all fake? That every shared word, every loved moment, is not a lie?" It was really good, again the colors kinda mess up my eyes and I have to highlihgt but the wording was fantastic and powerful
On May 26th 2009 leahspugs Said: 
leahspugs good job!!please look at some of my poems!!!thanks!