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aiejfaeiapjepij YESH! ^_^ XDRate this Poem
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The falling time
& I had the words, as tears they fell, but no way to make those words come out of me, onto this paper.
Where have they gone, into me so deep, where are they when I need them to realease my feelings? I drive my mind so far as to rhyme, just to let it loose, but I think in deeper perspective, it's my falling time.
This time, my falling time, the falling time of words unknown, words that won't escpae my aching fingers that are so ready to release. The falling time is dimming the fire from my fingers, and my mind, that burns with a passion for what I feel is true.
But oh the falling time, I've lost all I had. Whil'st in the time of falling I may find myself not broken anymore, but whole, for the escaped words held me so far back from who I was.
The falling time might save me but it may take my words away.
Please Login to post comments| On July 12th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: |
| I like this alot too. I love the last line :) |
| On July 7th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| I really liked this one a lot too. The best line was " The falling time is dimming the fire from my fingers, and my mind, that burns with a passion for what I feel is true.". Two things i see, "falling time" is repeated so much in the poem, which can be good to add a motif but it just gets repitiios. The other thing i see is that the colors of grey and yellow are hard for me to see, maybe because im legally blind but still I had to highlight everything to read it |
| On July 5th 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
| awwww I really really like this one of the best poems I've read on this site for sure. I wish there was more tho :/ |
| On June 19th 2009 Marissa2233 Said: |
| wow, this is so unique. i like it |
| On June 3rd 2009 ViableFate Said: |
| This is quite spectacular. No lie. I like how you used it. |
