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Created:
03/14 2007
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594
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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My Black Dahlia |
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Bluelife |
Bluelife
With one little pill so much can change,
i call it the bluelife it gets me derranged,
hour after hour getting what i need,
is this really, really, trully helping me,
i think it is, no more pain no more doubt,
I feel happy and i let it all out,
so this i say to you,
if what you choose is this blue,
dont forget about the ones who love you through and through,
its not really worth it,
it never really was,
fuck all that bullshit you dont need that buzz,
Roxys are one thing that will never go away,
but if you are strong i promise you, jus as he promised me, you will be here to stay.
- ONE LOVE -
| On October 18th 2008 1ambeer1 Said: |
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| crazy! but i really like it |
| On January 23rd 2008 ReneakaKC Said: |
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| COOL!!! =D |
| On January 5th 2008 darkmatters Said: |
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| nice |
| On December 3rd 2007 hottiesmnth25 Said: |
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| this one is well written i like your work |
| On November 29th 2007 whatawonderiam Said: |
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| you should make more poems this one is good. |
| On November 1st 2007 morbidangel585 Said: |
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| oo this is my fav. one =] |
| On May 9th 2007 arahmazing Said: |
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| I really like this one. You're a good writer. Good rhythm. (: |
| On April 27th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: |
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| i like the rhyme of the poem... very good.. thumbs up |
| On April 24th 2007 runawaylove18 Said: |
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| nice job |
| On April 21st 2007 hottpinkpixie Said: |
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| this one reminds me of my dad, he died of an overdose almost 2 years ago. makes me want to cry. well written |
| On April 11th 2007 Trippaholic Said: |
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| very well written :) |
| On March 17th 2007 baby101204 Said: |
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| amazing |
| On March 16th 2007 dureall Said: |
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| My dad has a bluelife too....It's called viagra Nice rythem I like it. |
| On March 15th 2007 leegonzalez Said: |
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| drugs lead to deranged desparity. all you need you were born with. great poem! |
| On March 14th 2007 Sarsbabyface Said: |
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| didnt expect the ending at the start.. Nice job.. |
| On March 14th 2007 KitsuneKai Said: |
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| You have a wonderful sense of rhythym, and you're writing capabilities are very much enhanced by your passion. All in all, it is, once again, beautiful! *hugs* |


