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Created:
07/29 2008
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267
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Love
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My Great Escape
More of just a poem than a riddle, what I did with it just seemed fun :P
It is my great escape,
The string attaching sadness and bliss,
It is my great escape,
It's mystic touch gives me happiness.
It is my alarm clock,
The sweet sound gives such a nice awake,
It is my alarm clock,
It's caring reach takes my breath away.
It is my anti-drug,
Breaking touch takes the image away,
It is my anti-drug,
It's better than a drug anyway.
What is my great escape?
(Roll over box for answer)
Tell me what you liked or didn't like about this before you give me a rate, I'd rather comments over rates any day ;) I use this website not for popularity, but to get comments on my works :) ... and because it's fun :]
Please Login to post comments| On July 29th 2008 GrungeMania Said: |
| I loved it. |
| On July 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said: |
| this is very creative i liked it a lot i like that you throughout the poem you kept me guessing as to what you were talking about then at the end you gave the answer very different but also very awesome i love it! |
| On July 29th 2008 a11exx Said: |
| outstanding! |
| On July 29th 2008 justinxavierx Said: |
| wow, this was really good. i loved it. |
| On July 29th 2008 101091 Said: |
| Great job, I really love it. |
| On July 29th 2008 hollistechik08 Said: |
| i love this! good job! :) |
| On July 29th 2008 Jeff1315 Said: |
| Lol it was actually meant as... The reason I get up is Love ;) |
| On July 29th 2008 speederspider Said: |
| my alarm clock pisses me off. |
| On July 29th 2008 SimpleInsanity Said: |
| this was really cool. I espeacially like the part about the alarm clock. I'v never thought of it as loving/caring. |
| On July 29th 2008 LiaAmia Said: |
| i like it. -lia
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| On July 29th 2008 snuggles214725 Said: |
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| i loved it keep doin u shawty |
