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sad love poem

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Created: 04/13 2008
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Category: Pain

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A Spring Rain

As the old man sat rocking, watching a spring rain,
there came a strange sadness at seeing it again.
Then the smells and sounds began taking him away,
back to the place where lost memories stay.

He had grown old and forgotten some years
and as memories awoke, so did his tears.
He became angry, how could he not know
she had even existed just minutes ago?

He thought of her face and the shine in her eyes
when they made love, the sound of her cries,
The deep love she gave him, his precious sweet wife,
her memory he would keep for the rest of his life.

Then the rain disappeared and the clouds broke apart,
he wished it was that easy to mend his old heart.
It had been a long day so he would just go to bed
and hope his dreams kept her in his head.
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On May 1st 2008 DontStealArt Said: 
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On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: 
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On April 15th 2008 13Peace Said: 
13Peace Beautiful baby, I luv it!
On April 14th 2008 jeff2625 Said: 
jeff2625 love it..you have a way with words...keep writing..I love reading ur poems..
On April 14th 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord you dont have to be old for the rain to envoke lost memories. beautifully written.
On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane This is one of my favorites of yours. I've did some similar scribblings of my own but they never really amounted to much-I got frustrated and set them aside I suppose, but anyways...You created the whole thing much, much better than I could have ever thought of doing!! Great write~
On April 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said: 
Thuggishone This is great man I love this honestly.
On April 14th 2008 JessicAngel Said: 
JessicAngel oh its so sad, never really thought about from this perceptive! nice!
On April 13th 2008 jessisakura16 Said: 
jessisakura16 I hearts it. =]
On April 13th 2008 Slackee Said: 
Slackee Wow. . .You're really good!
On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: 
XxbloodstainxX Painfully written, but beautiful in a sad way.