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a poem that hurts

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Created: 04/13 2008
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Category: Pain

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Rainbow Child

Skin the color of snow
with eyes red as flame
an albino who smiled

he was born deaf
and feared the sun
always he smiled
even when shunned

surrounding his eyes
skin blackened and brown
many years of abuse
from a man he called "Dad"
and yet he smiled

teeth turned yellow
from years of neglect
no one taught him
the basics of dental care
he still smiled

I too stared
at his strangeness
his multiple colors
and his radiant smile

curious as a child can be
I wrote him a note
"why are you always smiling"

He smiled
as he wrote
"I have been blessed
with many different colors
much like humanity itself"

I cried, then I smiled too!


Much of what you are reading
is true, some of it was enhanced
and the rainbow child shall
remain nameless, but he forever
smiles.......
(I'm sorry if you cry, I did
writing it)
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On May 1st 2008 DontStealArt Said: 
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On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: 
tyiqoqibfiobao be warned Jermie6363 has be found stealing others poems if you would like links to specific poems they can be found at this chat http://www.testriffic.com/chats/43911 or you can message me and i will show you where he stole the poems from some are his but most of his top ones are stolen thank you the next one robbed could be u
On April 17th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Well done on the poem! :)
On April 15th 2008 EmoGurl123 Said: 
EmoGurl123 this is truly amazing.
On April 15th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth I like that you confront and bring awareness to things too often only spoke about under one’s breath and behind another’s back. I particularly liked that the second person in this poem wrote him a note to ask him a question. What a simple solution to things that we don’t understand. Ask!…Good on ya Jermie for shining your light once again!
On April 15th 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord Humanity is so quick to judges thoes that are diferant and yet they are so misunderstode. a beautifull poem about a sad topic. well written as all ways Jamie
On April 14th 2008 jeff2625 Said: 
jeff2625 love it..great poem...
On April 14th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 really good
On April 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Wow I liked it! :)
On April 14th 2008 fallenXx420 Said: 
my picture
wow ... i liked it a lot.
On April 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said: 
hirschey11 i almost cried but im at school so i didnt lol KMP
On April 14th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said: 
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow. This is amazing! :]
On April 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 excellent man. excellent.
On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane Another amazing write! You never let me down!
On April 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said: 
Thuggishone that's great.
On April 14th 2008 JessicAngel Said: 
JessicAngel wow that is so beautiful!
On April 14th 2008 dhmm Said: 
dhmm awwwww this is the kind and yet sad thing i have ever read
On April 13th 2008 BiAnIcole Said: 
BiAnIcole aweee =]
On April 13th 2008 kesaia1029 Said: 
kesaia1029 wow..ur such an amazing poet.So emotionally =').Keep it up plz!
On April 13th 2008 piratesrule78 Said: 
piratesrule78 i almost cried too. really good
On April 13th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said: 
lexiigurl345 you are lukky id be crying if my bf didnt just say heyy babe i love you!
On April 13th 2008 kaity4514 Said: 
kaity4514 reallly good! i like it alot!
On April 13th 2008 disneyfan12 Said: 
disneyfan12 XxbloodstainxX is right this poem has alot of emotion. it's great!
On April 13th 2008 Slackee Said: 
Slackee I agree with bloodstain
On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: 
XxbloodstainxX I almost cried. Your poems have such emotion.