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Created:
04/13 2008
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396
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Pain
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Rainbow Child
Skin the color of snow
with eyes red as flame
an albino who smiled
he was born deaf
and feared the sun
always he smiled
even when shunned
surrounding his eyes
skin blackened and brown
many years of abuse
from a man he called "Dad"
and yet he smiled
teeth turned yellow
from years of neglect
no one taught him
the basics of dental care
he still smiled
I too stared
at his strangeness
his multiple colors
and his radiant smile
curious as a child can be
I wrote him a note
"why are you always smiling"
He smiled
as he wrote
"I have been blessed
with many different colors
much like humanity itself"
I cried, then I smiled too!
Much of what you are reading
is true, some of it was enhanced
and the rainbow child shall
remain nameless, but he forever
smiles.......
(I'm sorry if you cry, I did
writing it)
with eyes red as flame
an albino who smiled
he was born deaf
and feared the sun
always he smiled
even when shunned
surrounding his eyes
skin blackened and brown
many years of abuse
from a man he called "Dad"
and yet he smiled
teeth turned yellow
from years of neglect
no one taught him
the basics of dental care
he still smiled
I too stared
at his strangeness
his multiple colors
and his radiant smile
curious as a child can be
I wrote him a note
"why are you always smiling"
He smiled
as he wrote
"I have been blessed
with many different colors
much like humanity itself"
I cried, then I smiled too!
Much of what you are reading
is true, some of it was enhanced
and the rainbow child shall
remain nameless, but he forever
smiles.......
(I'm sorry if you cry, I did
writing it)
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| On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: |
| On April 17th 2008 lisaljb Said: |
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| Well done on the poem! :) |
| On April 15th 2008 EmoGurl123 Said: |
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| this is truly amazing. |
| On April 15th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: |
| On April 15th 2008 mydragonlord Said: |
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| Humanity is so quick to judges thoes that are diferant and yet they are so misunderstode. a beautifull poem about a sad topic. well written as all ways Jamie
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| On April 14th 2008 jeff2625 Said: |
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| love it..great poem... |
| On April 14th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: |
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| really good |
| On April 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said: |
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| Wow I liked it! :) |
| On April 14th 2008 fallenXx420 Said: |
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| wow ... i liked it a lot. |
| On April 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said: |
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| i almost cried but im at school so i didnt lol KMP |
| On April 14th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said: |
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| Wow. This is amazing! :] |
| On April 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| excellent man. excellent. |
| On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| Another amazing write! You never let me down! |
| On April 14th 2008 Thuggishone Said: |
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| that's great. |
| On April 14th 2008 JessicAngel Said: |
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| wow that is so beautiful! |
| On April 14th 2008 dhmm Said: |
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| awwwww this is the kind and yet sad thing i have ever read |
| On April 13th 2008 BiAnIcole Said: |
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| aweee =] |
| On April 13th 2008 kesaia1029 Said: |
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| wow..ur such an amazing poet.So emotionally =').Keep it up plz! |
| On April 13th 2008 piratesrule78 Said: |
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| i almost cried too. really good |
| On April 13th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said: |
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| you are lukky id be crying if my bf didnt just say heyy babe i love you! |
| On April 13th 2008 kaity4514 Said: |
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| reallly good!
i like it alot! |
| On April 13th 2008 disneyfan12 Said: |
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| XxbloodstainxX is right this poem has alot of emotion. it's great! |
| On April 13th 2008 Slackee Said: |
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| I agree with bloodstain |
| On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: |
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| I almost cried. Your poems have such emotion. |


