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Give Me Tonight

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Created: 04/14 2008
Views: 313
Category: Love

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Give Me Tonight

That I've never been so good to be your man
When you needed me, I never gave you my hand
I know I've been wrong, this is a consequence
But give me tonight, give me one more chance

That I've always suffocated your beautiful day
When you needed someone aside, I never stay
It's all getting wrong but I can't show you the way
Please give me tonight and I'll make it all okay

That I've always been in that wrong direction
And then I keep asking you about your cognition
But I'll be changed and now I'm in a big mission
Then give me tonight, I'll show you love emotion

That I've hurt you from time to time you're with me
I'm such a fool and too much messing your naivety
Done with bad situation, can't take the responsibility
Oh give me tonight because I need to make you see

That I've never given all the best that I could do
Gave you my promises but I never make them true
But what I truly feel deep in my heart, I bet you knew
So give me tonight cause this heart is all about you
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On May 1st 2008 DontStealArt Said: 
DontStealArt
On May 1st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said: 
tyiqoqibfiobao be warned Jermie6363 has be found stealing others poems if you would like links to specific poems they can be found at this chat http://www.testriffic.com/chats/43911 or you can message me and i will show you where he stole the poems from some are his but most of his top ones are stolen thank you the next one robbed could be u
On April 19th 2008 seekerovtruth Said: 
seekerovtruth A selfless heart is a beautiful thing. I agree with the others...let me know when your poetry book is published! :)
On April 17th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Beautifully done! :)
On April 16th 2008 TheBranster Said: 
TheBranster tonight? sorry, cant do. but im opened for thursday ;)
On April 16th 2008 speederspider Said: 
speederspider *Sobs* Your work is absolutely amazing. I can relate to this and it just really is good. More like fantastic. Yeah I'll say fantastic. It brought tears to my eyes.
On April 15th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: 
XxbloodstainxX I agree with muse4apoem. You should consider publishing your work, you're an outstanding poet.
On April 15th 2008 dsouthernlily Said: 
my picture
wow..........
On April 14th 2008 sweething200 Said: 
sweething200 that was so sweet you should write books
On April 14th 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem You need to make a book. Your very good at writing! :)
On April 14th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said: 
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow..I love it!
On April 14th 2008 goosebumpgirl1 Said: 
goosebumpgirl1 -claps- my goodness man your poems are amazing
On April 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 really good. masterful
On April 14th 2008 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane The last line was the killer for me! Very sweet. I have a very close, close friend who, when I ask what he's thinking, he replys with, "all about you".....So yeah-I loved it. :)