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My friend asked how I was.Rate this Poem
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Created:
04/15 2007
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285
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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Hiding, are we? |
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Hate |
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This Friendship |
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Vivica |
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Hey you. |
Hate
A general feeling.
It comes and goes.
It's just there now.
Sitting silently, deep down.
Waiting.
Waiting ever so patiently.
Its poor victim shall come.
Its prey will be sorry.
When it does pounce, it will not stop.
It will not stop until it's casualty is completely obliterated from the inside out.
Please Login to post comments| On May 15th 2007 pmillertimep Said: |
| passive agressive for sure |
| On April 29th 2007 isdrowning Said: |
| oh that's how my hate ends up. then remorse normally sets in. normally. anyway, this is an amazing free verse. |
| On April 26th 2007 sunny102 Said: |
| Love this...powerfully correct:) |
| On April 18th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
| Excellent poem! |
| On April 17th 2007 duffskaterx Said: |
| i like it. :) |
| On April 16th 2007 sahalsaver Said: |
| This is great, perfectly described |
| On April 16th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said: |
| lmmfao i fuckin' love you so much kathleen...this poem is awsome : P |
| On April 15th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said: |
| Short and crisp. The inner rage, a great poem. |
| On April 15th 2007 BrokenWiingz Said: |
| this poem is uknowinly strong,watever that means but above all its good |
| On April 15th 2007 dureall Said: |
| Nicely portrayed. |
