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Something I wrote when I was 17...Rate this Poem
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Created:
05/02 2007
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172
Category:
Tragedy
My Poems
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10
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No Escape |
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9
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Silence |
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11
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Take it all away |
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9
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Can't Take This |
No Escape
No Escape
Don't make a sound
Held down
Slapped around
On the ground
It is now the price I must pay
As you take it all away
What I have worked so hard for
There is nothing more to fight for
No escape
Don't make a sound
Held down
Slapped around
On the ground
It is now the price I must pay
As you take it all away
What I have worked so hard for
There is nothing more to fight for
No escape
Please Login to post comments| On July 18th 2007 autrydennis Said: |
| its sad'n's me to think that you may have went though this , but great job
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| On June 10th 2007 MythriS Said: |
| i like this poem...it shows the hardship in life (for me anyhow)...its really good |
| On May 6th 2007 Lindseyk1989 Said: |
| Wow thats deep & I hope your doing better! ♥ me |
| On May 6th 2007 LindaLisa Said: |
| Live with it* |
| On May 2nd 2007 LindaLisa Said: |
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| somewhat...it changed my life and I had to start over. I learn to leave with it now to my best. |
| On May 2nd 2007 Ax72 Said: |
| but you got out ok, didn't you? |
