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Created:
01/07 2008
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308
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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Come, Take my Hand |
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42
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Lovely Eyes |
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27
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Forgetting Eyes |
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Growing Cold |
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Fade... |
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Strings |
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33
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Doesn't Do... |
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25
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Dancing in the Street |
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23
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Substitute... |
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Where? |
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The Ark |
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Oh, Mine Angel... |
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31
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The Strength to Go on... |
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'Ere We Part |
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MoonGlint |
MoonGlint
The moon glints off steel.
Blood is dripping on the floor.
By my hand... he dies
Please Login to post comments| On August 3rd 2009 CrystalClear84 Said: |
| FUCK |
| On December 18th 2008 hawkstar Said: |
| Nice, I like it :) |
| On November 2nd 2008 alyxxxxxxx Said: |
| This is the first haiku I've ever seen on testriffic! woohoo! for some reason i don't really like the second stanza, it just seems like it's not very... poetic. |
| On March 11th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said: |
| Short..but nice. [: |
| On February 21st 2008 HumanF17TH Said: |
| very strong...i love the first line : P this is a good attempt at a haiku i like it : ) |
| On January 20th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: |
| Really good! I like it :D Its a good attempt, I'm not very good either. But hey, the more you do it the more you get better right? :D lol. Anyways, thumbs up! |
| On January 18th 2008 surefirefailur Said: |
| It's good. I don't like the last line but otherwise.... I love how you can blow us away with the emotion but keep it so small. not you best, but very good. |
| On January 8th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said: |
| This is an attempt at haiku. I'm not very good at any kind of Japanese art, from Haiku to Zen, I suck, but I like this one and hope all you guys do too. |
