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Created: 05/16 2007
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Category: Love

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I Miss you.

Forever and Never

forever and never, you said it again.

but until now i never knew what you meant.

we're young but its obvious this clock it still ticking.

a year down the line now and this love is still kicking.

 

we spiral in as one, and our it love combines

forever love tingles warm against spines.

and as we fall into the darkness of the end,

we have a promise made that they cant comprehend.

for we will die early, together and young.

you said "save the planet, kill yourself"

and these are your feelings which connot be helped.

but perhaps it was not the planet you meant

like the withering rose, a time rather not spent 

forever; everlasting, never; it just isnt true

youll find something different if you combine the two.

forever and never wont die because, its sublime

forever and never  preserved for all time. 

to kill it before it feels the oncoming pain

sparing the torment and physical pain. 

this is not suicide, nor is it death

it is the utter of a love like mcbeth 

 

forever and never, you said it again.

but until now i never knew what you meant.

we're young but its obvious this clock it still ticking.

a year down the line now and this love is still kicking.

 

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On May 22nd 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said: 
xxxAngelicaxxx i love it!!! awesome.
On May 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang woah,,, that is so weird,,,, i actually wrote a poem,, almost like urs,, based on my uh,, ex-bf.... interesting,,, i like ur rhyming,,, great job!.. heheh,,, McBeth... Death.,.. hmmmmmm.....~~~Pang
On May 17th 2007 LucianLust Said: 
LucianLust not as good as your stuff :)
On May 17th 2007 fuckmyfuck Said: 
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god i fucking love you so much. this is amazing. your so perfect. im in love with you