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Its not supposed to be flowy.Rate this Poem
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Nothing. |
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I remember. |
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My one and only fishie |
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No one says a word. |
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Please Don't Cry |
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I don't know who I am. |
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I'm never going to be what you want. |
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A Single Tulip |
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Nothing.
Moving forward to reach the peak point of excitement but it never comes.
Never feeling anything when I'm with you. Not a thing because my minds somewhere else.
On her.
Moving to nothing because I don't care for you.
You've never had my heart and you never will.
Put your heart back in your chest. I don't want it.
I don't have a heart because she stole it.
Or maybe I let her have it.
I cant feel a thing when I'm with you. Not one thing.
When she's here.. Im full and content.
I don't really need you.
I would never use you but I don't really need you.
I liked you but I didn't love you.
I never will.
She has my heart and I have nothing else to give.
Sorry.
Please Login to post comments| On July 8th 2009 PhantomDream17 Said: |
| Wicked! I can relate to how you're feeling. Awesome poem. |
| On July 5th 2009 Realmuckoy Said: |
| Sick! Great job. yeah it wasn't flowy but it was damn good, and it made it's own kind of unique flow :D |
| On July 4th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
| I really like this! :D its just..i know exactly how it feels, and i think its the first poem i've had a connection with on here. |
| On July 4th 2009 ThruOnesEyes Said: |
| "it's not supposed to be" should never be a sentence spoken when writing, dear. What'd be the fun in correcting mistakes, & exploring the senses of your own mind's wandering? The subconscious stories need to be read, one way or another, to reach a higher & clearer understanding, or expression, that's more greater than the "fully focused" intentions had. :) & from the looks of it, "it's not supposed to be" turned into "exactly how it should be: True." |
| On July 4th 2009 Vexion15 Said: |
| Oh this is why you thought mine was so similar to yours... |
| On July 4th 2009 tiffany1058 Said: |
| i likt this alot i have felt this before this is very good |
