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A haunting poem about loss. Plz readRate this Poem
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My Poems
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38
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River of Life |
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30
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Drowning Depression |
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22
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Bitter Heartache |
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21
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A Worthless Penny |
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13
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Monster Hunt |
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16
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Winter Memories |
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14
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Infant Sun |
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18
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Healing and Grieving |
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17
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Trapped in the Forest of Victoria |
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14
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Our Lot |
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14
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Rotted from the hate |
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10
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Angel of Humanity |
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13
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The Chill |
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15
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Useless Poetry? |
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Haterful Skies |
The Fishing Line
The Fishing Line
I cast a line beyond the sign
“No fishing” echoes in my mind
I reel the twine and cast again
To fish the missing half of mine
Cattails sway in nightly doubts
About the stroke of haunting nine
And if I cry, I spook the souls
Who swim around the fisher’s line
While In my box, I search for bait
Distain, despair, and weights of fate
A net is fine, if you don’t mind
It was the veil of my pale bride
We woke the dawn in many ponds
Beyond the warning of the signs
I cannot speak of moments bleak
So silence spools my fishing line
In nights of rite deprived of sight
Her screaming takes a solemn toll
From mortal soul to fishing hole
My lover’s fright the waters stole
I saw her bubbles as they burst
A curse to splash my every throw
It sinks in me, her memory
Weighted down like my betrothed
I feel a tug, the bobber drops
She reels with me, an absent hold
Past the signs of death foretold
We fish to catch her wanting soul
Comments and Critique welcome and appriciated :)
| On September 25th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
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| Thanks, maybe I'll do that. I should socialize more here. |
| On September 25th 2009 pkb2009 Said: |
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| Beautiful as always maui. You need to get back on the site man! |


