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My Poems
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33
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Forest Song |
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21
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Night is my Metaphor |
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22
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Endless Thoughts |
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15
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Desert |
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17
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Why? |
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15
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Snow |
Desert
Stars were scattered here and there across the clear night sky
A small grey hawk spread its wings to soar and fly
A faint ring circled perfectly around the glowing full moon
Casting light among the dusty dunes
The single call of a coyote triggered more to stray
While the quiet sound of a hooting howl cooed away
Creepy crawlies scampered across giant mounds of sand
Creating trails that could be seen all across the land
One colossal snake slithered sideways down a hill
As that same small hawk eyed it with pure skill
Several jackrabbits hopped into the moonlight
Unknowing that they too could be a bite
Two horned lizards stared at each other with evil eyes
A fight to the death would win the female prize
The coyotes’ calls and the owl’s coos left in silence
Causing the mood to rise and tense
Each creature stopped and stared as a clapping sound boomed
As thick black clouds suddenly grew and consumed
A sudden strike of pure white light struck the ground
Causing every living thing dash around
The gentle sound of pitter patter spread along the earth
Which would eventually cause a new rebirth
Again, again the thunder roared
As the ground began to store and hoard
All the animals had disappeared
Except that hawk who never feared
It flew and soared through the rain
Who knows when it will return in vain
| On February 7th 2009 erickagere Said: |
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| I love this, especially because I live in the desert. I love how you use creatures in your poems. |
| On December 30th 2008 animallover925 Said: |
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| WOW i felt like i was acually there!! u are a very good writer!! |
| On November 28th 2007 gonzo4201 Said: |
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| this was pretty good, felt like I was actually sitting in the desert |
| On November 28th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said: |
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| i like this..very good...and so different from what i've read here so far...good work. |
| On November 27th 2007 Meowspots Said: |
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| thanks babe! |
| On November 27th 2007 nockets Said: |
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| one of the most amazing poems i've ever read!!!!!!!! |


