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Here's a sonnet I wrote once upon a time

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Created: 04/26 2007
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Category: Other

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Forest Song
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Why?
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Snow

Forest Song

The forest was filled with oranges and reds,

Thick blackness was rising above the trees;

The creatures gazed over the scene with dread,

Each creature's head turn to see a strong breeze.

Smiles grew as rain drops fell to the ground,

Harder and harder, flames began to die;

Louder, as steam added on to the sound,

Flames grew lower as wings began to fly.

Chills blew through the land, as snowfall began,

The creatures all scattered to hide from the storm;

Here and there, as every little one ran,

One creature stood out, while in the transform.

I heard a song as I glanced at the moon,

The wolf sang with a graceful, peaceful tune.

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On April 6th 2009 huronpliskin Said: 
huronpliskin u have a really descriptive way of writing...i really picture myself in a dark forest with wolves chasing me!!! lol
On February 7th 2009 erickagere Said: 
erickagere Wow, you are really talented. I love wolves too :)
On January 31st 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: 
xxxshylaxxx wow really amazing
On December 30th 2008 animallover925 Said: 
animallover925 I love wolves and this is such a great poem!!
On December 29th 2008 godsbluejay Said: 
godsbluejay very nice indeed...lol
On November 30th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227 well god damnnnn....mi gusta! lol I think it is very important for a reader to be able to visualize what the poet is inking to paper (so to speak) you have certainly manaaged to do that.. pat urself on the back.......forreal, do it now. lol there u go.
On May 24th 2007 Meowspots Said: 
Meowspots wow! thank you so much! it's one of my first things... i'm not much w/ poetry! lol... *blushes*
On May 23rd 2007 Qurmudjin Said: 
Qurmudjin Outstanding transformation from forest fire to winter storm. Great ending from the wolf's perpective. Is it your first sonnet? If so, I'm doubly impressed!
    
On May 4th 2007 WaterSheerie Said: 
WaterSheerie I like wolves, and I like poems that include wolves :)
On May 3rd 2007 freaki1225 Said: 
freaki1225 nice poem!!
On May 2nd 2007 FlowerFlagGirl Said: 
FlowerFlagGirl ooh... this is cool... it's so you!!!
On April 29th 2007 Meowspots Said: 
Meowspots tweet! hehe... first mate fleur!
On April 29th 2007 ShinseiOnnen Said: 
ShinseiOnnen Ooooh! It finally lets me vote!!! Well, I'd call you Cap'n Kiara, but people might wonder... :\
On April 29th 2007 Meowspots Said: 
Meowspots you can call me.... um... what ever you want to call me. star is calling me twi... but those are out np names
On April 28th 2007 WinterRaeven Said: 
WinterRaeven Very nice, Meowspots! btw, what would you like me to call you on here?
On April 26th 2007 Meowspots Said: 
Meowspots geee... thnx... ;D
On April 26th 2007 nockets Said: 
nockets cooooooool. that's deep man.
On April 26th 2007 Meowspots Said: 
Meowspots hope ya'll like it!! hehe... ;)