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it's uh interesting, I actually like it!Rate this Poem
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Created:
02/25 2007
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199
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My Poems
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My Secret Plea |
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The Royal Sun |
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Confussion |
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My Emotion |
freedom
Does he see me standing there, quaking in the cold,
Does he know my secrets, that I've never told,
Does he wonder at my anguish, does he hear my plea?
I stand there silently, wishing, wishing that he would let me be,
I've had enough of his temptations, his lies, and his propositions,
Does he finally understand, does he finnally see,
All I want is for him to go, go away and let me be,
And when he's gone, O! when he's gone, I will finally be free,
Because I've been hideing, I've been liying, I've been someone else,
But with him gone, gone far away, I will be free,
free to be me.
| On May 12th 2007 jak5of5 Said: |
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| This is really good |
| On April 23rd 2007 mrskritter Said: |
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| I think it is very good |
| On February 25th 2007 Nerdwoman Said: |
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| lol I can give myself a thumbs up! that's funny |
| On February 25th 2007 Nerdwoman Said: |
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| It's about someone living a lie, and finally being able to free themselves, from themself. If anyone was wondering! lol. |


