Email:
Password:

Created By

Author's Comments

it's uh interesting, I actually like it!

Rate this Poem

+6

Info

Link:
Created: 02/25 2007
Views: 199
Category: Other

My Poems

+ 6
freedom
+ 9
My Secret Plea
+ 10
The Royal Sun
+ 7
Confussion
+ 8
My Emotion

freedom

Does he see me standing there, quaking in the cold,

Does he know my secrets, that I've never told,

Does he wonder at my anguish, does he hear my plea?

I stand there silently, wishing, wishing that he would let me be,

I've had enough of his temptations, his lies, and his propositions,

Does he finally understand, does he finnally see,

All I want is for him to go, go away and let me be,

And when he's gone, O! when he's gone, I will finally be free,

Because I've been hideing, I've been liying, I've been someone else,  

But with him gone, gone far away, I will be free,

                   free to be me.

 

Please Login to post comments
On May 12th 2007 jak5of5 Said: 
jak5of5 This is really good
On April 23rd 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter I think it is very good
On February 25th 2007 Nerdwoman Said: 
Nerdwoman lol I can give myself a thumbs up! that's funny
On February 25th 2007 Nerdwoman Said: 
Nerdwoman It's about someone living a lie, and finally being able to free themselves, from themself. If anyone was wondering! lol.