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Created: 02/27 2007
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Category: Respect

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The Royal Sun

A Great Light  

It is dawn in the morning light,

That takes away the fearful night,

With brilliant colors all array,

Gold, royal purple, and crimson red,

Makes a grand ascent over head,

He is king while his glory shines,

The sun opens up his eager eyes,

 As he welcomes the day,

With a warm smile and a beautiful light,

To shine over all that is right,

As the day lingers hour by hour,

The sun begins to loose his power,

As he makes his great decent,

He let’s us know his time is spent,

By dyeing the sky in many tones,

As to say he will return just how he went,

 So now it is dusk in the evening night.

                   -Mary E.H.
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On June 29th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang does the first word say: "It is?".... hard to tell,, the "it" should be farther away from the "is",,, hard to distinguish apart even tho the font is kickass,,, lol,, ^__^~........... i really really like this one,, *applause*,,, wonderful lines in each verse and ur simple use of "as" is good and consistent repitition in overall is pretty good,,,,,,,,,, ur good with the descriptions too,,, wonderful job! XD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On April 23rd 2007 mrskritter Said: 
mrskritter realy nice I like this one alot
On March 6th 2007 fudgesicles Said: 
fudgesicles wow...i liked that especially the lettering