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this is my emotion.

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Created: 06/18 2007
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Category: Passion

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My Emotion

My Emotion

My Emotion 

These days feel so long,

The world seems so wrong,

My heart has no song,

And somehow I feel I don’t belong.

Since he is gone,

I’ve been convincing myself that it’s all okay,

But my heart whispers “no”

My mind wanders throughout the day,

But always winds up thinking of him,

Yes him, the one face I will never see again,

The one voice I will never hear whispering in my ear,

The one boy I opened up to,

The one boy that stole my heart,

The one heart that I loved,

The one and only lips I’ve ever kissed,

The one dear smile I have so tenderly missed,

The one that I took a chance on,

A chance that I will never forget,

That chance, those fateful words,

In just a few hours,

Sure as the sun rises,

I had sealed our fate,

It all ended,

I will never see him again,

I will never hear him again.

My heart aches in sorrow,

While my mind tells me it will all be better tomorrow.

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On June 29th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang oooh,,, i also liked ur writing structure with the bolds in the beginning of each line,, kewl,,, mind if i use that sometimes too???...lol
On June 29th 2007 PoeticPang Said: 
PoeticPang hmmmmm., the rhyming in the beginning with endings of "-ong" was too rhythmic,, like,, idk,, sometimes u gotta know when to stop rhyming words,,, but the flow of the rest of the parts was very consistant and full of depth,,, u put ur heart and soul onto this with words and ur point of view on the experience really is effective and stands out true,,,, good job! XD... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang