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Tears of Rebellion |
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What if There Was no Religion? |
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Goodbye My Love |
What if There Was no Religion?
What if we had a time machine?
Bringing us to past, present, future?
What if our actions changed the world?
No chances, accidents, coincidences?
What if we were so important we were God?
Controlling our life, love, minds?
What if this was already real?
Dreams that bring us o the past, present, future.
A life to be lived. No judging, sinning, hating.
Minds that control our life, love, selves.
What if it's disguised by Christianity?
What if there was no religion?
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This isn't intended to be offencive or bash on another religion, it's just a few of my opinions crammed in with some experiances with Christian fanatics that stated their opinions as facts, that bashed on Satanism, that judged and hated not just themselves--but everyone around them, obsest with religion.
Please Login to post comments| On October 31st 2009 IHMV Said: |
| I totally believe that dreams are the gates to the past, present and future. I believe there's no such thing as chances, accidents or coincidences because I as a human make a big impact on all the people around me and what happens in my life. I believe I'm my own god--everyone is their own god. |
| On October 19th 2009 OmfgJJsikBITCH Said: |
| Hey sorry for the typo(s) I kinda just wrote it on the spot and I had to write it quick because this computer restarts alot and it won't let me save it so yeah, it was extermley rushed.
If you're a bit confused about it then you can just message me, I don't think I got my opinions across very clear at all.
Also, I'm not really a poemfan, you can probly tell, but who knows, maybe I'll keep writing and get better one day ^^
Thanks guys, constructive critisism PLEASE! xx |
