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Created:
08/05 2009
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Last Hours
Life The most precious gift Like Christmas Day Getting exactly what you wanted Happiness Wrapped in black paper And a bright red bow Life The gift of your dreams Those first few days are the most precious You take pride in your gift You care for it. A feeling of excitement A sense of magic Life After awhile the magic fades You become older Your gift begins to mean less The gift that was once so precious Is now nothing more than a burden Not being taken care of properly Taken for granted It crumbles into a fine dust Life
Please Login to post comments| On November 7th 2009 DansLaNuit Said: |
| Wow, I agree with Muse. This is super great for your first poem. 10/10 |
| On August 6th 2009 muse4apoem Said: |
| Wow very creative and very visual not to shabby for your first poem. :) I didn't write that well for my first poem. |
