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i saw him there, lost and uncared for

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The LiiiTTle-wEE TRee

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There's a baby pine tree
hidden amongst the giant-ancient elms and oaks
Sought to be seen in the greener woods
- suffocating inbetween all the adults
Holding onto the gravity and grounds
-to survive
- to thrive
The elders steal all the sunrays
and all the renewing raindrops
It's in agony that the lil guy only gets one tinsy-winsy droplet
and only one half second of sunshine
But you see...
that's it's secret to a prolonging life
- though it suffers with tthe hazing and bias(ing)
- it never gives up
-it's growing even in the darkness
and the growth continues
 with or without
some kind of chance of help...
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On September 11th 2007 InvisibleFlame Said :
InvisibleFlame Nice metaphor of life...!
On August 10th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said :
mazerthumpkin ha! great prose!
On August 7th 2007 venus111 Said :
venus111 Great poem. You're imagery was so vivid I acutually felt sorry for the little tree. I love trees. Kudos.
On August 6th 2007 ALLIEBIRD Said :
ALLIEBIRD very cool! LOVE IT :DD
On August 3rd 2007 JohnLG Said :
JohnLG wow thats nice
On August 3rd 2007 kromo777 Said :
kromo777 i like it mucho
On August 2nd 2007 OreoCat Said :
OreoCat good job! i like it :)
On August 2nd 2007 jimbobthethird Said :
jimbobthethird wow. it has a message. fantastic. i like it the poor tree. especially the surviving thriving part. being a great literacy genious i am very pleased when things rhyme. ha ha.okay :)
On August 2nd 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman ooooh this is so inspirational!!!
On August 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg I love it...it is so cute.
On August 1st 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wow..good job!! i like it alot
On August 1st 2007 crazkoala Said :
crazkoala this poem expressed emotion with such unique individuality that.. i am awed into speechlessness. I LOVE IT! definately my favorite
On August 1st 2007 Jush Said :
Jush ur a unique writer n i love seeing what u come up with!!!
On August 1st 2007 joabizz Said :
joabizz you are funny, and I love and admire your creative mind, I wrote a poem called *The Little Blank Canvas*, my inspiration came from what I thought it would say if it could talk...lol...so strange... anyway, I loved your poem...cuteness....
On August 1st 2007 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 I love the ending.
On August 1st 2007 TaUroNui Said :
TaUroNui really good
On August 1st 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 wow thats really good its like i could see it
On August 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I absolutely love the inspiration for writing this one. It is kinda sad, but sweet at the same time. I love the picture that your words created in my mind~
On August 1st 2007 bethm300 Said :
bethm300 very good!
On August 1st 2007 petersonsv Said :
petersonsv that's it's secret to a prolonging life great line