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i saw him there, lost and uncared forRate this Poem
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Created:
08/01 2007
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710
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Respect
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The LiiiTTle-wEE TRee
There's a baby pine tree
hidden amongst the giant-ancient elms and oaks
Sought to be seen in the greener woods
- suffocating inbetween all the adults
Holding onto the gravity and grounds
-to survive
- to thrive
The elders steal all the sunrays
and all the renewing raindrops
It's in agony that the lil guy only gets one tinsy-winsy droplet
and only one half second of sunshine
But you see...
that's it's secret to a prolonging life
- though it suffers with tthe hazing and bias(ing)
- it never gives up
-it's growing even in the darkness
and the growth continues
with or without
some kind of chance of help...
hidden amongst the giant-ancient elms and oaks
Sought to be seen in the greener woods
- suffocating inbetween all the adults
Holding onto the gravity and grounds
-to survive
- to thrive
The elders steal all the sunrays
and all the renewing raindrops
It's in agony that the lil guy only gets one tinsy-winsy droplet
and only one half second of sunshine
But you see...
that's it's secret to a prolonging life
- though it suffers with tthe hazing and bias(ing)
- it never gives up
-it's growing even in the darkness
and the growth continues
with or without
some kind of chance of help...
| On September 11th 2007 InvisibleFlame Said: |
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| Nice metaphor of life...! |
| On August 10th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: |
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| ha! great prose! |
| On August 7th 2007 venus111 Said: |
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| Great poem. You're imagery was so vivid I acutually felt sorry for the little tree. I love trees. Kudos. |
| On August 6th 2007 ALLIEBIRD Said: |
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| very cool! LOVE IT :DD |
| On August 3rd 2007 JohnLG Said: |
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| wow thats nice |
| On August 3rd 2007 kromo777 Said: |
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| i like it mucho |
| On August 2nd 2007 OreoCat Said: |
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| good job! i like it :) |
| On August 2nd 2007 jimbobthethird Said: |
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| wow. it has a message. fantastic. i like it the poor tree. especially the surviving thriving part. being a great literacy genious i am very pleased when things rhyme. ha ha.okay :) |
| On August 2nd 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| ooooh this is so inspirational!!! |
| On August 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| I love it...it is so cute. |
| On August 1st 2007 California1516 Said: |
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| wow..good job!! i like it alot |
| On August 1st 2007 crazkoala Said: |
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| this poem expressed emotion with such unique individuality that.. i am awed into speechlessness. I LOVE IT! definately my favorite |
| On August 1st 2007 Jush Said: |
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| ur a unique writer n i love seeing what u come up with!!! |
| On August 1st 2007 joabizz Said: |
| On August 1st 2007 blahidyblah929 Said: |
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| I love the ending. |
| On August 1st 2007 TaUroNui Said: |
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| really good |
| On August 1st 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said: |
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| wow thats really good its like i could see it |
| On August 1st 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I absolutely love the inspiration for writing this one. It is kinda sad, but sweet at the same time. I love the picture that your words created in my mind~ |
| On August 1st 2007 bethm300 Said: |
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| very good! |
| On August 1st 2007 petersonsv Said: |
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| that's it's secret to a prolonging life
great line |


