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It Sickens Me
Guts splattered, heads flattened, eyes saddened…
Death sprawled in the roadways
Vermin and rodents
Hit by a car and run over several, several times
Squirrels, opossums, raccoons, frogs, turtles, chipmunks, deer, groundhogs,
Oh…oh… how horrid……….
Even worse though…
Pets….
Hit and run
Spewed and sputtered brains
Crushed limbs and broken hearts
Veterinarian help?
Tragic lies to the kiddies
Oh.. Poor children
Cats, dogs, horses, cows, lambs, sheep, llamas, ferrets, monkeys, pigs, chickens, ducks…. In the pet cemetery.
It happens
On the man-made roads of tragedy
Paved roads=trail trickers
Cars=polluted murderers
Drivers=wildlife destroyers
Whatever it be…
What comes, comes…
What goes, goes…
There is no way to prevent such a fate…
Not even when a human being is lying, dying on the pavement in front of your house… what men make--- men must take the fate.
Please Login to post comments| On September 21st 2007 edgarpoeincarn Said: |
| whoa! this is awesome i like the line "what men make-men must take the fate" its so awesome! kudos |
| On August 30th 2007 villesvamp89 Said: |
| I like it, I love poems that confuse me a bit, but it is nice. |
| On August 21st 2007 Vestque Said: |
| Boo Roadkill! Yay Poem :D |
| On August 19th 2007 TaUroNui Said: |
| good poem! |
| On August 19th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: |
| makes me sad... great poem. |
| On August 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| I was really feelin' this one in the beginning, but then you kinda switched it up-still feelin' it, but in a completely different way...Anyways, I love your poems like this-very creative and I can feel the flow of your thoughts!! |
| On August 18th 2007 Myst222 Said: |
| You're right. As a whole, humans are destructive. Whatever happened to coexistance in harmony?!? |
| On August 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
| a little confused, but i got the last stanzaa... |
| On August 17th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: |
| i get your message of animal deaths, but it does tend to get a bit fuzzy as I think you tried to make two points instead of one. One you have just usual roadkill..and then the other pet and unfortunate deaths...just kinda is a bit fuzzy. |
| On August 17th 2007 Illiad65 Said: |
| oh...ummm, okay, that works, little confused but you know. |
| On August 16th 2007 browneyes33 Said: |
| I think you are talking about animals getting ran over lying to children about what happened. you start out with things people don't think so much about like possums and move on to children's/family pets.. only thing is a lot of the animals you mentioned at the end are in no cemetery they're being eaten.. I think I got it tho' let me know? |
| On August 16th 2007 joabizz Said: |
| hmmm, finally!! not so much a fan of this.. I didn't get it, and the color ugh,,, I am not feeling this one Pang! (I am still a fan of you) lol |
| On August 16th 2007 Bladecjc Said: |
| that's funny |
| On August 16th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Oh wow, this one confused me a little. Maybe I need to get more sleep, I don't know. I will however vote because your imagination impresses me. |
