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My Poems
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Shades of Reality |
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Tree Hugger |
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Can't Breathe... |
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Sunflower (Like a) |
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The Birthday |
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Untitled (18-6-03 + 22-2-07) |
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Dead Whales |
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Hello Kitty |
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Fresh Rain |
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Love is Forever and Never |
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Snow Angels |
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Lusting After Blood |
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Clowns |
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Crazy Hands
Pianists:::
Little taps
Blurs of fingers
Soft and lovingly caressed
Sharp and pouncing
Those hands that see the sound of music
The fingers finding the keys
The spirit of music flowing through
How do they do that?
It’s always a wonder to me
The gift of idle hands
It’s almost unbelievably supernatural.
Painters:::
Picking up a brush handle
Holding it lightly against the palms
Held in mid air
And with certain agility
Slashing upon the canvas
Hands that see the truth of art
Seeing the great idea
Long swipes
Short dashes
Little blots
Big waves
Lines, curves, shapes, color
How do they capture that image?
The hands perform out a dance
Using the brush as a prop
Putting the inspiration onto the paper and making it come alive
Writers:::
Be it typing insanely out on keyboards of a computer
Or
Hand writing achingly upon a notebook with pens and pencils
Passionate words typed/written out
Ideas of such extraordinary inspirations
Putting feelings and thoughts right into words
Making sense of such being
Poets
Journalists
Novelists
Those that give meaning through expression of words to reason
Drummers:::
Tap, tap, taaap
Dum, dum-dum, dum-chiiing…
Slow motions using flicking of the wrist
Fast and hard movements that make such impact
Sticks thrown and flipped
Twirling about and caught again to be rejoiced with the beating of the drums
Gamers:::
Thumb movements
Moving in odd ways
Like a bobble head
Pressing the buttons
Pushing and holding
Quick and sharp hits
Up
Down
Right
Left
Depending on what system console
Play Station 1, 2, 3
Xbox 360
Nintendo (game cube, game boy, Wii)
Sometimes playing for hours upon hours
Trying to beat the game
Finding addictions and complications
Gripping the controller too long sometimes that your hands go numb
And yet…
With thumbs aching
You just can’t seem to put it down or turn it off
Hands that have become apart of the game
| On August 30th 2007 villesvamp89 Said: |
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| I looooove your style. This is amazing. |
| On August 22nd 2007 pinocciodreams Said: |
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| wow, i like the way youve focussed on more than one thing, but theyre all linked. great job with the poem. |
| On August 21st 2007 Vestque Said: |
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| Great work here! Awesome. |
| On August 19th 2007 TaUroNui Said: |
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| i love this poem, u should write more of these! |
| On August 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I love this..A lot of thought went into it...My favorite is the "gamers" and "like a bobble head"..Anyways, you had great imagery in this one~ |
| On August 18th 2007 Myst222 Said: |
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| Full of passion! Great imagery! A lot of feeling in this one! Well done! |
| On August 17th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| yes, i love the hands god gave us :) this is a really good poem |
| On August 17th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said: |
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| I like your description for everything as I fouond them all to be quite accurate. I'm a writer and somewhat of a painter. Great job! |
| On August 16th 2007 browneyes33 Said: |
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| great job!! |
| On August 16th 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| it would have *been* perfect...:) |
| On August 16th 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| I have to agree with Blade... It was all so beautiful until (The Gamer) if you left that out it would have be perfect... but it still is amazing.. |
| On August 16th 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| I love this! Great work {yet again!}!! |
| On August 16th 2007 Bladecjc Said: |
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| the gamers part killed it i think, im a writer, an artist (digital), and a gamer....but all of sudden the poem was about what happens with your hands--not some passionate ability you have. |
| On August 16th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| Wow, I love the writing but it makes it kinda hard to read. The poem is a unique writing which of course I like. Your imagination is incredible. I like this one. |


