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the planet

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Created: 08/31 2007
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Category: Respect

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)Jupiter(

full fledged moons
brighten up the skies
day or night
all is always light

the mists of vapor clouds
smother down to the grounds
each glint in the dirt
sparkles of shattered specks
from the blasted comets

the craters dig deep
frosted pools of acid
that gurgle an odd, eerie pop

rings like halos 
cast a balance around the orb
each ring circles like the inside of an onion

 

oh wait...

how do i know this to be true?
i don't actually know
since i've never been there.
it is only my imagination.

nevermine...

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On September 21st 2007 mcihellejane Said: 
mcihellejane You have a wonderful imagination-your work is always so unique and full of thought...This was a good one!
On September 3rd 2007 joabizz Said: 
joabizz ha ha ha !! you are so funny,,, i think that we could hang out in the real world...great...Ms. Pang...
On September 2nd 2007 transgenic Said: 
transgenic I love this! Very unique and creative!