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"The Hair Dance/Poem"
~adaptation from the dance by the Vaj ethnic people of the courtship ritual by Vaj men and woman... called "The Horn Comb"... as seen on the chinese tv channel CCTV-america~
He caresses her hair in his hands
Lovingly brushes her long silky hair
Sensual touches
She pulls the comb gently through his hair
Delicate fingers pulling strands back
Sensitive strip
In turns, they brush eachother's hair
As signs of passion and true affection
Her hair is long and beautiful
Just shy of her waist line
He admires it with soft brushes
His hair is ruffled and short
Just as rough as his strength
She smiles as she brushes out the tangles
Rhythmic swishes of the brushings
Soft and light flutters of the hair being brushed
Such sweetness spreads with each touch of love in brushes
~oooh,, maybe i mistook the title,, hmmmr?.. it was a dance i saw,, but i interpreted more into some form of just brushing ur hair, simply put,,, the tenderness of such normal-everyday things we do,, for eachother and with eachother,, .. so not dance,, but, possible?~
| On September 21st 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
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| I love the way you took the simple thought of brushing hair and made it very sensual and sexy! Great work even if you kinda veered away from the dance! |
| On September 3rd 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| hair brushing is definitley sexy... great imagery |


