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Created:
09/21 2007
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261
Category:
Tragedy
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Deadly Injections
Deadly Injections
So disturbingly quiet
You creep into my veins
Like a catch-able secret
You take my whispers
And seep into my heart
Pounding and blasting
With eyes wide
And dilated
I grasp for air
Lungs filling to none
You take hold
All I have is you
Breathe me out
Breathe me in
Don’t escape from my stream
The blood gushes through
And through
And through
And runs throughout
In me
Throughout me
All in me
I am yours
Take me
Fold me in your arms
I am yours
Yes, I am yours
Please Login to post comments| On October 13th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said: |
| I just changed my mind, it's methamphetamines isn't it? I got the dilated and pinned confused. |
| On October 13th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said: |
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| This is quite very cool. I guess it's due to my passion for morphine. And I suppose heroin is the subject here. I prefer morphine, the quality is always guaranteed. My poetry is very different to yours and I do take it seriously. Just pick one to read, they're all just as good I reckon. You shouldn't be disappointed. |
| On September 21st 2007 mrskritter Said: |
| nice work |
| On September 21st 2007 edgarpoeincarn Said: |
| wow great imagery and the emotion wonderful love it ! |
| On September 21st 2007 transgenic Said: |
| Amazing work, yet again!! |
| On September 21st 2007 joabizz Said: |
| this was very good, I agree with micihellejane, repeating the words brought the poem alive.. great |
| On September 21st 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| Ewwww, I have the worlds biggest phobia of needles. I love the poem though, you describe it so well. |
| On September 21st 2007 mcihellejane Said: |
| I love this one!! Using the repititon really pounds the words home. To me it is like the "injection" taking affect as your words start to repeat and run together it is as if the mind is relaxing or blurring or something. Hope that made sense!! |
