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Ode to BLUE
Ode to BLUE
I am blind...
my eyes stained to blue...
glazed and stuck open with glue...
Looking through blue lens
pernicious sights
blurr and radiate
like lasers shooting from my eyes
Glowing blue hues in the sky
so deep, so damp
waters reflecting under my skin
seeping and rippling in my veins
rivers and streams
asunder and drip out
The blues clash within
within and without
flying me from tree to tree
I am a blue jay
chirping to find my nest
the cobalt winds envelope
all around, all about
everything became so true
Encrusted in the blues
i stumbled in a field
of wild forget-me-nots
arms wide open - catching
catching the winds and nothings
The sky falls down
and all is quiescent
like navy-starred-skies
on a full moon night
Sucking a blueberry popsicle
until my lips are left
with soft palenesses of frost
Streaking down the runway
lacey lingerie of chlorine
drying my skin
until all you'll see
is bones on bones
Powders puffing my dust
skipping my meals
as each whisp is sniffed
snuffed to toxicate
my justifications of judgement
I am in imaginary land
all is mistified honesties
laying like fields of poison
before my feet
itching to run me down
deeper into the grounds
I am behind...
stuck in the folds of after...
nothing - no more matters...
Oh blues, so... (is it) are you true?
| On January 22nd 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| Very cool. I love the vivid pictures you created in my mind. I love the chaoticness(word?) of it all, and yet it all has a common interest. Yeah..I definetly liked this one! |
| On November 6th 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| Great imagery! Love your word choice! Very unique and creative! |
| On November 6th 2007 countryfreak13 Said: |
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| WoW! That was good! I like how you can imagine every word that comes o you, if you know what I mean! This is a very well written poem! YEAHS!*thumbs up* Keep me posted! :D |
| On November 5th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: |
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| That's thoroughly amazing. I could "see" it. Just beautiful. I loved the depth and imagery. Your word choice was incredible. I'll agree--it was thought provoking. I enjoyed reading it. |
| On November 5th 2007 joabizz Said: |
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| WOW!! there was so many things that came of this for me.. I have felt like this, many many times. This was a very creative thought provoking piece!! I loved it!! |


