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Created:
11/19 2007
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What About Me?
i'm comforted in my mind
by the corners i hide myself in
each moment spent in wake
is a few grains of sands stuck
around the edges and cracks
inside my creased brain
i stumble and ad-lib through the day
and sleep in the shadows
of unknown left-overs
of the suns' lingering trail
show me a cause
from all these effects
all the time, i await
in the lounges of labs
there i experiment on experiances
and create a newer version of my own self
over and over again
never satisfied,
always bored and unamused
i cower in fright from the normalacy i dream in...
the silver metals i phrame the memories in
strings of tinkle-ing in the little electrolytes
throughout my moving body
i shudder to remember
what goes on and on - infinite
my head spins and stops
as my eyes stutter on the ground
at last...
I found where my feet have lead me to.
by the corners i hide myself in
each moment spent in wake
is a few grains of sands stuck
around the edges and cracks
inside my creased brain
i stumble and ad-lib through the day
and sleep in the shadows
of unknown left-overs
of the suns' lingering trail
show me a cause
from all these effects
all the time, i await
in the lounges of labs
there i experiment on experiances
and create a newer version of my own self
over and over again
never satisfied,
always bored and unamused
i cower in fright from the normalacy i dream in...
the silver metals i phrame the memories in
strings of tinkle-ing in the little electrolytes
throughout my moving body
i shudder to remember
what goes on and on - infinite
my head spins and stops
as my eyes stutter on the ground
at last...
I found where my feet have lead me to.
| On January 22nd 2008 mcihellejane Said: |
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| Another unique poem. I love your creativity. My favorite line in this one " I cower in fright from the normalacy I dream in"... |
| On December 8th 2007 transgenic Said: |
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| Love it! Unique, just like everything else you write, lol! |
| On November 23rd 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| wow i like it. |


