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Created: 04/27 2007
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Category: Other

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Shades of Reality

I wonder about reality
nowadays that is...
but never thought about it before.

hmmmmm....

To clash with the blue hues of the skies
and drip unto the red of my own flowing blood
I will follow the yellow of the sun's rays
and empty my eyes of the black and white.

I see colors
all day, all night
My eyes are inspired by the many colors
Is it real?
Hyptnotyzed into dreamings
Fallen into the aurora of mists
Am i sleeping with my eyes glazed opened?

To clash with the gray of the clouds
and drip unto the blackness of the night
I will follow the whites of my eyes
and empty myself of all colours.

To find myself unbounded by fallacies
and discover the true reality inside the black and white
Why is it that cats and dogs see in shades?
Why are some people cursed with the blind?
or why do some become colorblind?
The colors distract me with their beauty
Hallucinate me into daydreams
Fascinate me into temptations
Am i sleeping with my eyes glued shut?

Colors confuse me.
There seem to be too much individuality.

Shades of white and black confuse me.
There seem to be a lack of individuality.

Tell me... do u see me blended in with the colors of primary and secondary colors?

Or am i lost with the lesser shades of monochrome?

 

OR... do u see me standing invisible within the colors, clearly visible in black and white?

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On February 5th 2008 fawzia11 Said: 
fawzia11 Very unique and creative!
On September 22nd 2007 transgenic Said: 
transgenic This is amazing and very unique!
On August 30th 2007 meanatheart Said: 
meanatheart I really love this one. VERRYYY much.
On August 15th 2007 Myst222 Said: 
Myst222 this is absolutely amazing! very alluring!
On August 13th 2007 joabizz Said: 
joabizz your mind Pang!! is a very unique one... great poem..
On August 12th 2007 WaitingAlone Said: 
WaitingAlone this is really great, unique and amazing.
On August 12th 2007 browneyes33 Said: 
browneyes33 I really like this. original..awesome job
On August 10th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: 
mazerthumpkin awesome! good prose!
On August 7th 2007 boomboxbingbam Said: 
boomboxbingbam wow. i like this. this is great
On August 5th 2007 meanatheart Said: 
meanatheart I really really really like this. A whole bunch. Lots. Especially the 4th stanza.
On July 14th 2007 desolateflower Said: 
desolateflower wow i love this =] reminds me of my poem death. can u read it? i love all ur works! =]
On July 4th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: 
thatbluewoman love the second and third stanza
On May 7th 2007 luwanda Said: 
luwanda I like this poem a lot. you do have so many great lines in here. but they all need each other to work. I really love how you put words together smoothly. I never know how to word things. It comes out sounding like it came of of Master Yoda's mouth. aye. GREAT JOB!
On May 7th 2007 Qurmudjin Said: 
Qurmudjin this one has a lot of potential. keep working on it. I really like the lines "To clash with the blue hues of the skies" and "I will follow the whites of my eyes and empty myself of all colours."