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alot of metaphoric things in itRate this Poem
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The Trail in the Grass
There's something about it.
My feet pressed down
Onto the grass surface
Leaving imprints of my being behind
The clean-cut path;
The indelible growth of grass and weeds;
The lush essence of harsh living and sweet death
It's ineffable how such beautifully tragic
occurrances are viewed
through hypocritical human eyes
The weeds are tall.
My hands pass by them
Gently, like the wind
Struggling through and through
Leaving my mark as they rustle
With my devastating touch
I wander through this labyrinth of human ruins
I follow onto this pathetic path
Stuck between derogatory existances and guised expediencies
There is still wilderness thriving here.
My pupils dilate into a clear view of destined terminus
And my body sways with the winding roads ahead and after
As if I already new what was meant to come and be
This was that something of before.
I will learn to stop in my tracks and stumble throught the naturally taller grasses and become like the weeds of long ago
Wildy untouched by human stained hands.
| On August 10th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: |
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| I love it... |
| On July 4th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| very, very insightful (is that the word?) and i really like it :) i love metaphors, too |
| On July 2nd 2007 Myst222 Said: |
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| very perceptive. i like it alot. |
| On June 20th 2007 AlexINTJ Said: |
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| I love of perception of things here. This is wonderful and yeah there is a LOT of stuff in this poem. Your style is very beautiful and I love how articulate the poem is. Brilliant! |
| On June 7th 2007 salamanteri Said: |
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| reminds me of the songi n pocahontas,colours of the wind, nice.. |


