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meanies---electro shock

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Created: 06/04 2007
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Category: Tragedy

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Powerlines Cutting Through the Trees

I see them as i pass down and up the broken roads

Those trees split in between

The bodily torn structures of those poor ancients of wilderness

Unwisely inventions by human beings built to creat efficiencies like some kind of ignorant giant

Forgoing and splicing the Earth into checkered ramifications of thoughtless outlines of demolition plans

It's like slowly watching a heart breaking into twos and threes

Entwined onslaught killing the environment, and rushing the waters to flood out all

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On July 4th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: 
thatbluewoman there was this tree near my old house that had a HUGE hole smack dab in the middle of the branches made especially for power lines to go through... kinda looked like a donut... interesting point in your poem though
On July 4th 2007 InTheMist Said: 
InTheMist wow.....this is great....such a strong response to something most people tend to over look....I agree whole-heartedly
On July 2nd 2007 Myst222 Said: 
Myst222 You dont know how much i agree. I often imagine an army of mythical and magical beings destroying blacktop and concrete. Doing away with electricity, to once again claim their land. Back to basics, ya know?!