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This Old House
Humming of old pipelines
Creaks of floor boards
Whirls of wind pounding against the window panes
Whispers of ‘whoos’ singing along with wind chimes
Crackles of ‘blip-drip’ from the basin of gorge
Squawking of ‘eeeks’ from the ungreased door hinges
A squalid stink raises a mist about the house
A fog of dust follows with the opened windows blowing around
A creeping cat lurks throughout the tall grasses in the unkempt yard, in bound
The decaying of architecture has aroused
And each fallen shingle broken as they fall down
Buzzing from bees sound out as if nested underground
The arid air arises to meet the sun’s heat
The wealth of wild weeds is nothing to be beat
The mocking mixed mitigation of crows squawking up sprees
Each fire fly flames among the tall grasses--- shows
All desolate doorways divert into labyrinths that grow
And for every engraved effect of the old --- no one knows
There are no paths that are ably seen
There have no more humans living here
There lays down only the creeps
The chimney collapsed and now ashes reek
Steps are missing going up the stairs
All has corrupted and now weak
This place will stand and topple to its end of days
Abandoned, but accompanied for all time
That’s all I can say...
| On August 12th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said: |
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| good alliteration and assonance usage. experimenting? |
| On July 18th 2007 salamanteri Said: |
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| sounds like my old house.. lol.. it was really old.. (not that the current one would be new :P) like it.. |
| On July 4th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
| On July 4th 2007 thatbluewoman Said: |
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| wow this is awesome. like an ancient remains thingy |
| On July 2nd 2007 Myst222 Said: |
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| very vivid and descriptive. Kudos! |


