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Created: 06/28 2009
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Category: Lyric

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Just One Lonely Heart.

  Holding hand and walking through the daisies. Imagining he future we would never have.

Flawless nights, up on the phone. Stretched remarks held untold. Jaw breaking smiles and two lonely hearts.

    Thumping to an empty rhythm.

        Empty rhythm.

  Glowing people, keeping their long forgotten hope. Their long forgotten hope.

   I guess it wasn't meant to be.

 Why didn't you just let me hold your hand through it all? Throughout it all? 

        It would have worked,

          and I would have held on.

           But you let go,  

              and now I can't find you.

  Instead of two lonely hearts, there is only one.

     Thumping to its own empty rhythm.

        Without you.

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On August 7th 2009 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 Well done.
On July 22nd 2009 RockAngelGirl Said: 
RockAngelGirl i love it =)
On July 20th 2009 DayumItsMikey Said: 
DayumItsMikey I agree with Becky. But it's not too bad :D
On July 4th 2009 Vexion15 Said: 
Vexion15 This reminds me of friends that I've had issues with
On June 28th 2009 RadDianaxx298 Said: 
RadDianaxx298 Omg :D Thanks Becky. FINALLY some CC! :P Thanks for being truthful :)
On June 28th 2009 kitkat298 Said: 
kitkat298 crunchy goodness...jk...tis good...:P