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I dunno.. Iffy poem. :]Rate this Poem
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Created:
07/20 2009
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91
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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12
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Just One Lonely Heart. |
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8
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Is it love? |
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8
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Despair At Its Best. |
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11
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Thy Sweet Addiction. |
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8
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To let it happen. |
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8
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Let Their Sanity Waver. |
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6
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Lets play like little kids |
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17
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Diana |
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8
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NightTime(October 1st,2009) |
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10
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Epidemic Murder. |
Despair At Its Best.
Why are we all alone tonight,
In this never ending darkness?
Long deep tunnels holding deep dark secrets.
Such deep secrets.
I promised you I wouldnt tell,
Not even to a soul what we have done.
Yet words slip and I'm caught,
In a swirl of life.
Amist the world we hide in,
I'm yelling for an outstreatched hand.
Maybe yours?
If you promise to help,
I promise to help in return.
Just take me out of the misery,
The hard pain throught me.
Make me forget about those secrets.
No more dark secrets for me.
My lips are sealed and eyes closed.
I'm in the darkness,
and you still arnt here.
So just let me die.
Please Login to post comments| On August 7th 2009 xXSad1Xx Said: |
| I agree with Maui. This was really good for someone your age, actually. I really can relate to this more than anyone. |
| On July 20th 2009 MauiWowies Said: |
| OK well I liked this one better as it had more imagery about it and you did a good job adding the theme or meaning. One thing though. As a reader I am questioning, what did you let slip, what has he done. When you bring up something like that, if you bring it up, dont let it be a vague statement because it sparks are curiousity but doenst follow through. Just a quick note |
| On July 20th 2009 MammothJoey Said: |
| I agree with DayumItsMikey, It is excellent. |
| On July 20th 2009 DayumItsMikey Said: |
| :D Excellent in my eyes |
