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Created: 06/04 2009
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Category: Lyric

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Present Valley

Present Valley

From the tops of  steep snow covered mountains,

to a cracked section of pavement in a ghetto alley,

Our life is our pathway to this present valley,

Should i float down stream or Shall i climb back,

No, make  my own path, i cant get my time back,

What you soak up like a sponge, apply and create; amounts to who you are,

Like a funnel of experiences flowing out the bottom, what you save becomes you,

Time is against you and your destiny is calling

Like gravity, Time is Falling !$$!

 

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On July 3rd 2009 servantofall36 Said: 
servantofall36 'what you save becomes you'. This is very interesting. Well done. :)
On June 4th 2009 ViableFate Said: 
ViableFate I have to admit, I'm very impressed. It's really rythmic.
On June 4th 2009 500nets Said: 
500nets very very cool........ bravo on not rhyming it