Created By
Rate this Poem
Info
Created:
06/04 2009
Views:
223
Category:
Lyric
My Poems
|
+
21
|
Present Valley |
Present Valley
From the tops of steep snow covered mountains,
to a cracked section of pavement in a ghetto alley,
Our life is our pathway to this present valley,
Should i float down stream or Shall i climb back,
No, make my own path, i cant get my time back,
What you soak up like a sponge, apply and create; amounts to who you are,
Like a funnel of experiences flowing out the bottom, what you save becomes you,
Time is against you and your destiny is calling
Like gravity, Time is Falling !$$!
| On July 3rd 2009 servantofall36 Said: |
|
| 'what you save becomes you'. This is very interesting. Well done. :) |
| On June 4th 2009 ViableFate Said: |
|
| I have to admit, I'm very impressed. It's really rythmic. |
| On June 4th 2009 500nets Said: |
|
| very very cool........ bravo on not rhyming it |


