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Thoughts about the Future

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Created: 01/05 2009
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Category: Fear

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The thought of taking that first step is scary

Is this really My Future?

What if it's not for me?

What if I screw up?

Does superman really hate Lex Luthor?

A person can learn to see

That living life is about making decisions and taking risks

But a person can also learn to believe

That by believing, They know that God in in control

His face shining down upon them, he will have his say

And no matter what happens after that first step

No longer will they need to be consoled,

Their lives will be taken care of in every way.

 

 

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On September 10th 2009 ypod Said: 
ypod I like it a lot good job!
On January 8th 2009 Realmuckoy Said: 
Realmuckoy Great flow, and great message... But it is kinda biased. Not everyone believes in god, and Even if you were writing this for yourself, You almost made it seem as if you were telling someone this.
On January 6th 2009 Ryden22 Said: 
Ryden22 blah.... Please add the word "possible" right before the word "way" in the last line.