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Created: 11/05 2008
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Category: Fear

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Curse Of The Albino Silverback

I tried

Really I tried

Reverends, fathers, nuns, and saints

Wouldn’t have taken that stride

It is your side

I choose to stand by

When I made those vows

And made you my wife

 

 

Choices we all make

Chances we take

A reckless decision you made

Like a quarterbacks audible to our fates

I do love primates

But not that monkey your back

And your opiate dreams

Has allowed it to become an ape in fact

 

 

A lifetime of devotion

Indeed my guarantee

But your Colombian potion

Has taken its toll on me

To cause such a sinful affair

It must possess a caiman like grasp

I grow weary of catching you there

Snorting off of that reflective glass

 

 

I am at a cerebral loss

I know not my next course of action

What I know is that our child cannot be

A part of your “coked” liquefaction

Though you’ve become my world

“She” has become my universe

I am begging you please! Fight for our baby girl

Or I fear that “Silverback’s” sheer might will pound you into a hearse

 

 

 

                                              Douglas S. Williams

 

 

(Note)This is a work of fiction. But represents a matter that infact happens all too often.

 

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On July 3rd 2009 deadpoet Said: 
deadpoet your poetry is so different from other ones on here...that's what makes it stand out and what makes it special.
On November 12th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said: 
EvilRaven9892 I loves this one!
On November 7th 2008 justjetjustis Said: 
justjetjustis wowwwwwwwwww wowwwwww i don't have anything to say just wowwww
On November 5th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 it flowed really well. i enjoyed it =]
On November 5th 2008 101091 Said: 
101091 Very well done. I love they way you write.
On November 5th 2008 Calypso32 Said: 
Calypso32 interesting thoughts here friend, I liked the usage of a parallel analogy to communicate this. took me a minute to get the thought process, but once I got it I was sitting here thinking "woah". Great write, potent and a needed message.~L
On November 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 definitely feelin this... Lovin the Metaphors... that monkey on your back, can be a beast that most would not be able to escape... Only the Strong survive... I am proof of that, though mine was American, not Colombian, if ya know what I mean... Definitely the same situation...